Monday, September 28, 2009

For example...




2 comments:

  1. the about me section provided good insight on how anxiety has been a problem you overcame in your life. It is easy to see the topic of your blog is tied in with events in your life.
    the description gave a clear depiction of how the blog was going to be run by inviting readers to share their stories.
    the first post was a good example of a stressful situation you were put in. This is a good starting point because I know this has happened to other people.

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  2. I think the about me is great, it allows the reader to get somewhat personal with you Brooke and I think it will make people much more interested.

    The blog description does an excellent job of telling the blogger what they will be here to see and post about. I think your first post does a good job of backing this up.

    I like where you went with your first post Brooke, humor is most remembered. Hence, why I think it is a great post to open with; however, I would have liked to hear from you the author.

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